Matt Bellamy

"That I’m walking away from u?" u? u? Argh! Hehe text speak in poems is one of my pet peeves, but it's nice to see it's the only one in ...

Ooh, I really liked this. The best bit was, "Bleed until you are sorry! ... But you will never be sorry" because it seemed really energetic and angry, and then...a ...

I think the short, choppy lines worked really well in giving the feeling on energy, made me read it faster. Capitalising your I's would be good though, but if you ...

I liked them both. I wasn't sure about the ...? at the end of the first poem, though, it confused me a little. Also, the long line in the second ...

Best part: lone liness (Even the "lone" is isolated form "liness") I think Cicero has thoroughly critiqued this :P but, I will say, as a reader I felt intimidated. And ...

I liked the way you described things ironically-children without fathers, beaches without water. However, widows obviously don't have husbands, otherwise they wouldn't be widows. Maybe change it to wi

I liked the idea of this, but I think there were too many dots......too many exclamation marks and question marks, and too many capitals at the end. Writing should be ...

Last line of part six made me laugh. It's a serious piece but...hehe. I liked it. Maybe some of the swear words were unneccessary-used in moderation they would have more ...

Awwwwwww that's lovely! Well. Actually it was okay. Pretty good. I liked the casual tone. "I can almost feel you in my heart" I think the almost is important here, ...

"there, I just vomited live in Technicolor rainbows all over your front lawn. Are you happy now?" I really like that :) Made me laugh a little. Great tone. Also ...

Nice one Greggerg. A couple of things I'm not sure about, like the use of "it's like..." Seems kind of conversational and doesn't seem to really fit, I think "Darkness ...

Ack, I don't get it but I like it! It's sexy and very descriptive, very colourful-blue alien, red devil, thrusting into the dark. Seems quite playful at times-"sexiest, you demon". ...

Well, the first line certainly grabbed my attention. Leapt straight into what you wanted to say, that was good. Loved the last stanza, it was like, he chokes on the ...

I found this quite suspensful (is that a word?). I liked the way the poem was very drawn out, for its length, and found myself thinking until the end, "what ...

Ooooh. o.O I liked the way you built up suspense in this and made the reader ask questions, a good start that makes the reader want to find out more. ...